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"Temples in the Islands of Bali"

Laura R.
"Tell me what you like/dislike or what you feel it needs for a more complete composition."

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Morgan Owens wrote 12 years ago :
Looks good. You have a clear, and easy to understand composition. Once you start adding more shapes the clarity of the space is no more. The only thing I would add would be a few dark bird silhoettes (small dots or brush strokes) just left of the left structure just over the dip in the mountain.

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